What is Writing in the Digital Space?

What is Writing in the Digital Space? Group Draft

Sorry it's late! I had some technical difficulties. (like it took a very long time to upload and publish to YouTube)....
The things I am missing will make up for all the time I have yet to fill for the video.
I'm still waiting for people to answer my survey and then I'll be able to add them to my video.

**PS The quality isn't as good as it is on my computer and I need to fix that, any ideas?**

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  1. UnknownNovember 16, 2017 at 12:41 AM

    Kat, the visual on that was super professional, even just the way the screen was always moving. It was really easy to focus on the visual aspect because I didn't find myself getting distracted thinking about the person behind the editing. It sort of felt like a friendly orb was leading me around the digital world. I will admit that was a little confused what the exact point you were trying to make was (which could be a byproduct of it being late). The Skrillex was cool and it was a bit like I was flying during certain parts of the song, but then the screaming part was really jarring for me.

    I was seriously impressed by the way you organized the footage because it was so seamless. the biggest thing in my mind was that your overall point seemed very vague. But nice work! you rock!

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  2. Destiny B.November 16, 2017 at 6:32 AM

    I don't know how much time you've spent working with Google, but I'd encourage you to look into a Google Form for your survey. They're really easy to create, can be anonymous, and it's a link that can easily be sent to all of us in class. The user accessibility of it is just a bit easier than that of the post on the website for your post right now.

    When you say it doesn't look good on your computer, are you talking about it being blurry? The video I watched had some blurry parts in the screenshot video you were doing. One suggestion I'd have for making that easier to see (I don't know how to fix the blurriness) is to go full screen with your Google searching so that the font size is bigger for me as a consumer of your information.

    I like the music pretty well. It mostly just plays in the background, which is nice. When the voice came into the music, though, I was taken out of your presentation a little bit more.

    Looping through the "these are other definitions" and "examples" is a placeholder for your survey responses? I really liked when you used the phone browsing mechanism to show definitions, starting with hashtag because I was better able to follow along because of where it was.

    I think you have a super solid start!! I'm impressed by your technology skills here!! Way to go! I love the way your skills show through and I'm able to follow everything really well. I'm wondering if you're going to have any additional text? Is there any specific feedback you're looking for?

    Thanks for sharing! You're killing it!
    Destiny

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